Nicely animated, and quite funny.
i do say i must agree
Not bad really..
lonlyWOLF you fucking moron, this is really really good considering all the other shit that gets blammed out of the portal every day.
Well, in my opinion, this was very nicely animated, a bit short though.
They were sticks, which is a little overused, but great to start with. The explosions were really nice aswell.
The SFX were somewhat repetative, and almost ran over eachother alot, but they worked.
Overall this is very good for one of your first submissions.
Also, lonleyWOLf, write a review with a little constructive criticism you idiot, in case you didn't know, something in grey means it's UNDER JUDGEMENT, and is still pending to get on NG, so therefore it isn't "bleesing" NG as of yet. You probably stumbled upon this by accident after watching some stuff that was on the front page.
Eternity-Memory of Lightwaves
It was good and all, but if it's personal and sentimental, what the hell is it doing on a public website?
Well, like I mentioned to the abusive one, just cuz it's sentimental, doesn't mean I don't want to show others. I did put quite a bit of effort into it so naturally I'm gonna want to show off.
Yes, I hate emos aswell
Yes, I totally agree with you.
My brother is a big emofag, and I cannot stand the music he listens to.
Emo music isn't good, at all, there's no lyrical significance, or any fucking musical talent at that.
Just shitty riffs, and a whiny bitch of a lead singer, and, hahaha, this one always makes me laugh, the...uhhh...screamer?
What a shitty title to have: "Hey guys, I scream in an emo band"
They seem to jump around alot on stage for one simple reason, they're music is simple and easy to play.
Try listening to fucking Dream Theater, that's good, and thought provoking music.
I do wish there were less whiny fucking emo bitches on this planet.
I hate images:
Fuck the goth image
Fuck the emo image
Fuck the punk image
Fuck the gangster image
Your cartoon was decently animated, but could have been longer, and perhaps more animation. Good work, and I agree with you
"Maybe it could get turd of the week! That takes talent you know. Think about it: if it's THAT bad, how'd it pass judgement? So it has to be just enough people to like it while under judgement, then just enough people to dislike it after judgement. I'm not saying I have no self esteem but it is a talent! :P"
That was NOT talent, anybody can make a rap on sound recorder and synch into some frames without any animation.
That was BAD, it wasn't very funny either, you forced the rhyme, even if it didn't fit or make sense. One rule of writing: NEVER FORCE THE RHYME.
Your a very good animator
1400 frames, wow.
You are a very good animator i must say.
But the SFX were a little bad.
Also, I don't like da way u tok in dat shit.
It was pretty funny, but too tweeny.
It also looked like you tried so hard to make the walking look good, it looked bad.
But aside from that, it was good, keep it up and improve the walking.
..I gave this a 9, because I appreciate Sin City, but i didn't care for the song.
DocSqawk, when you negatively criticize, say something meaningful, not just "If this was your first submission please make it also your last"
Why should it be his last, you should only say that if it was truly, horrible, or a joke account or something. Hash actually put some thought and time into this..
Oh dear me, ive side tracked.
Anyway, it was good, if you drew all that, im impressed
Why is there so much shit coming from the clock crew? Also, It's beyond me why you worship some enigmatic strawberry who made some of the shittiest submissions of all time. :\
The gfx were good but the story was plain corn.
Next time put a little more thought into plot devlopment.
ahh i see... good review
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